Question

make a detail responce to the following paragragh:

I believe that growing old is not the same for all categories of people because individuals go through different life experiences. Not every person is going to live their life the exact same as everyone else. Race shapes the aging process because of the unequal rights and discrimination that's in the world. For example, lower income and stress linked to prejudice and discrimination are the reason only 62 percent of African Americans have positive health. Social class affects health because if one is very poor, then he cannot afford to go to the doctor regularly. Whereas, if one is wealthy, he can afford to go to the doctor whenever he pleases. Only 57 percent of individuals living below the poverty level have considerably "good" health. Gender also shapes the aging process because women typically live longer than men. As people age, they become more prone to chronic illnesses and life threatening conditions. Because of this fact, women are more prone to suffer from chronic disabilities, like arthritis.

Answer 1

Age is an important factor where people develop illness,the fact that poor people cannot afford medical aid is true in today's circumstance but that cannot be the factor contributing to chronic illnesses.Gender too plays an important role due to biological make up of the body women and men are prone to different illness as they age.Women by nature are made very caring sensitive and the strong upheavel of emotions could lead to illness like arthritis but on the contrary arthritis is strongly linked to increased stress levels and it is applicable to men where they are subject to high stress levels.It is the lifestyle we lead and out good dietary habits that will solely contribute to good health.