Question

Introversion/Extroversion Contribution to Marital Happiness (title)

The journals chosen will show Introversion/Extroversion play a major role in all aspects of marital and family happiness. Child raising, overall health, media contributions, are affected and help introverts and extroverts find self-happiness that translate to marital joy. Not just being introverted or extroverted contributes finding life satisfaction, but contributing factors effect introvert and extroverts differently causing a dissimilar course to find happiness.(hypothesis)

Above are the title and hypothesis for a research paper. Based on this feedback, "However you did not present the research question that you will be using throughout the course as you design your own original research study. And what you presented as a hypothesis is not the type of hypothesis that you were being asked to give. In research a hypothesis is your educated guess answer as to the outcome of your research question. It is a single testable statement that most often mirrors the question in the way that it is written." How can i revise both, title and hypothesis, to my professor's liking? I'm confused on how i should present it differently.

Answer 1

Introversion and Extraverion characteristics and their effect on Marital Happiness - this could be the title.

You cannot make claim in the title, or you can make a claim if you know it is proven.

The hypothesis could be:

The variables introversion and Extraverion are known to have varying effects on individuals lives and collective lives and on the levels of happiness.

The aim is to measure the synergistic affect between the two and the happiness index as a result.