Question

Edit these sentences to eliminate useless jargon.

a. To optimize your financial return, prioritize your investment goals.

b. The use of this product engenders a 50 percent repeat comsumer encounter.

c. Unless all parties interface synchronously within given parameters, the project will fail.

d. Acoustically attenuate our company's food consumption area.

e. We need to formulate a workable paradigm for this project.

Answer 1

1. To optimize your financial return, prioritize your investment goals------ Increase your earnings by investing smartly

2. The use of this product engenders a 50 percent repeat consumer encounter-------The use of the product will make 50% customers revisit

3. Unless all parties interface synchronously within given parameters, the project will fail -------If the team members don't perform their task on time, the project will fail.

4. Acoustically attenuate our company's food consumption area-------- Designed to reduce the food consumption area of the company

5. We need to formulate a workable paradigm for this project------ We need to make a workable (genuine) strategy for the project