Question

Revise the following sentences to improve parallel structure

1. Japanese and Korean carmakers are gaining in every market segment with products that offer reliability,performance,designs that are alluring, and prices that are competitive.

2. good security based on a combination of three types of identifying information: something you know, usually a password or PIN,Something you know ,such as a plastic cord, Key,or security token, And what you have on your person.

3. most biometric system are expensive to buy and use them is awkward.

Answer 1

1-Japanese and Korean car-makers are gaining in every market segment with products that offer reliability, performance, designs that are alluring, and competitive prices.

2- A good security system is based on a combination of three types of identifying information: something you know, usually a password or PIN, Something you have, such as a plastic card, Key, or security token, And what you have on your people such as your partner or sibling or friend.

3 Most biometric systems are expensive to buy and use them is awkward.