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Automated traffic enforcement tools were introduced to provide more comprehensive enforcement without diverting police officers from other duties (Bochner and Walden 2010). An automated traffic enforcement system is defined as a mechanical recording device that is triggered automatically by a traffic violation, so that information about the violating vehicle is recorded, making possible the subsequent identification of the vehicle for the purpose of sanctioning the owner or driver (Sagberg 2000).

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In order to provide more comprehensive enforcement without diverting police offers from other duties, automated traffic enforcement tools were introduced (Bochner and Walder 2010). An automated traffic enforcement system is a mechanical recording device that is triggered automatically by a traffic violation, and records the vehicle and owner related information. This allows the information about the violating vehicle to be recorded, without the need for an on duty traffic police person to stop and pull over the vehicle and talk to them. After the recorded data is processed, the vehicle and owner can easily be identified and appropriate fines or tickets can be issued to them (Sagberg 2000).