Question

Please correct the following sentence:

There should be 20 errors, these error are: 2 are missing quotation marks     3 are missing capital letters      3 apostrophe     6 have a comma error   1 has a fragment error and there are 5 mistake in number or end mark

Children begin to establish memories and collect reminders by the time theyre 3
or 4. My little granddaughter showed me her memory box last week. The painted tin box
had been packed last christmas with buttery danish cookies, but now it held some
crumpled papers a dried caterpillar and a rock. “Whats this, Jenny” I asked as I held up a
rumpled paper with streaks of red blue, and black crayon across it. Thats my rain she
replied. “Do you remember when it rained and water came under the door. Mama had to
jump on towels to soak up the water.” The dusty shriveled caterpillar reminded her of a
visit to her Aunt in the country and a walk they took along an irrigation ditch. The rock
coming from a late autumn picnic near Payson. As I looked into her blue eyes I knew
Jenny was building a storehouse of memories

Answer 1

Children begin to establish memories and collect reminders by the time they’re 3 or 4. My little granddaughter showerd me her memory box last week, “the painted tin boxhad been packed last christmas with buttery danish cookies but now it held some crumpled papers, dried caterpillar and a rock”. “What’s this, Jenny?” , I asked as I held up a rumpled paper woth streaks of red,blue and black crayon across it. “That’s my rain” , she replied. “Do you know wgen it rained and water came under the door, Mama had to jump on towels to soak up the water.” The dusty shrivelled caterpillar reminded her of a visit to her Aunt in the country and a walk that they took along an irrigation ditch, the rock came from a late Autumn picnic near Payson. As I looked into her blue eyes, I knew Jenny was building a storehouse of memories.

This is the correct passage