Question

Rewrite these sentences positively or appropriately

a. You will be happy to hear that your scholarship had been renewed.

b. We have failed to finish taking inventory.

c. I hope that you are satisfied enough to place future orders.

d. You will not qualify for the student membership rate of GH¢25 unless you are a full-time student.

e. I am sorry the clerk did not credit your account correctly.

Answer 1

a. You will be happy to hear that your scholarship had been renewed.

Better version1: You will be happy to hear that your scholarship has been renewed.

Better version2: Congratulations! Your scholarship has been renewed.

b. We have failed to finish taking inventory.

Better version1: We haven't finished taking inventory

Better version2: We will be finished taking inventory by evening(say approximate duration)

c. I hope that you are satisfied enough to place future orders.

Better version1: I hope that you will consider ordering with us again

Better version2: Call John(any name) whenever you need mangoes(say the order item name)

Better version3: We will be happy to serve you again.

d. You will not qualify for the student membership rate of GH¢25 unless you are a full-time student.

Better version: You get all the benefits of membership for only GH¢25 if you are a student.

e. I am sorry the clerk did not credit your account correctly

Better version: Your account statement has been corrected to include your payment of GH¢25(say the transaction amount)