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B) Entrepreneur Trip Hawkins appears in Japanese ads for the video game system his company designed. “It plugs into the future! He says in one ad, in a cameo spliced into shots of U.S kids playing the games. Hawkins is one of several US celebrities and business people whom plug products on Japanese TV.”

C) Mid size firms employing between 100 and 1,000 people represent only 4% of companies in the U.S.; but create 33% of all new jobss. One observer attributes their sucess to their being small enough to take advantage of economic opportunity’s agiley, but big enough to have access to credit and to operate on a natqional or even international scale. The biggestg hiring area for midsize company’s is wholesale and retail sales (38% of jobs), construction (20% of jobs, manufacturing (19% of jobs) and services(18% of jobs).

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"B) Entrepreneur Trip Hawkins appears in Japanese ads for the video game system that his company has designed.

“It plugs into the future!” he says in an ad. The cameo is spliced into shots of the US kids playing the games.

Hawkins is one of the many US celebrities and business people who plug products on Japanese TV."

"C) The mid-size firms employing between 100 to 1,000 people represent only 4% of companies in the U.S. They create 33% of all new jobs. One observer attributes their success to their being small enough to take advantage of economic opportunities available, but not big enough to have access to credit and to operate on a national or an international scale.

The biggest hiring area for midsize companies is in the wholesale and in the retail sales i.e. 38% of jobs, in construction (20% of the jobs), in manufacturing (19% of the jobs) and in services (18% of the jobs)."