Question

Rewrite #1 in the tone/voice required, you  can not change any of the wording below but you can add items and wording. Rewrite #2, the same instructions apply however you are required to finish the overall message.

Angry Voice/Tone…

1. Mary has been the pride of the community for decades. From feeding the homeless, holding clothing drives to operating an affordable daycare, Mary has been a blessing. Many would say she is an angel on earth providing miracles with limited income as a 5^th grade teacher.

Sympathetic Voice/Tone

Jacob the party guy has been spending his father’s money since birth. Traveling to all parts of the world with many friends in tow…….

Answer 1

#1. Though it was said that ,Mary has been the pride of the community for decades as a blessed nurse,she swindled investors out of millions.Her skull duggery in a nurse's disguise included various activities from feeding the homeless,holding clothing drives to operating an affordable day-care.Mary has been a wicked blessing to the people.Many would say she is an angel on earth providing miracles with limited income as a fifth grade teacher.But people didn't know she was a witch earning millions in disguise of a blessed nurse.

#2.Dr. Jacob , known as the party guy, has not been spending his father's money lavishly since birth.Though he has been travelling to all parts of the world with many friends in town,he is always aiding the needy,creating awareness about health care and hygiene.