Question

Add a framing sentence to the beginning of this paragraph. Also include other revisions for effectiveness.

The first two and last two weeks will be at the two intersections that were selected for the new “before” and “after” analysis. The first two weeks will include collecting data for the “before” results. The last two weeks will include collecting data for the “after” results. The third and fourth weeks will consist of data collection for the previously established intersection study.         

Answer 1

We can write and make it sound better like this.

A detailed explantion of the data collection activities in this project along with their timelines is described below. .

Data collection for the "new before" analysis will be carried out during the first two weeks, while data collection for the "new after" analysis will be carried out during the last two weeks. The third and fourth weeks will involve collecting data for the previously established intersection study.