Question

The following sentences lack “you attitude “in business correspondence rewrite them to achieve the “YOU ATTITUDE “.

note: in some cases you need to add information to revise the sentence effectively.

please answer all the question thanks in advanvce .

1- Your audit papers did not convert Canadian revenue into U.S Dollars and so we canceled the transaction.*

2- We at the Communication Center have started a series of speaking workshops. We will give you a certificate of recognition for completing them. *

3- Housing applications that arrive later than December 1 will be rejected right away. *

4- Today, we shipped the book you ordered and we will deliver it to you in 3 days. *

5- Unless you show us your loyalty membership card, we will not be giving you any discounts. *

Answer 1

ANSWERS

1.THE TRANSACTION WAS CANCELLED DUE TO AUDIT PAPERS WERE SUBMITTED WITH OUT CONVERTING CANADIAN REVENUE INTO US DOLLARS.

2.YOU WILL RECIEVE  A CERTIFICATE OF RECOGNITION IF COMPLETTING THE SERIES OF SPEAKING WORKSHOP AT THE COMMUNICATION CENTRE.

3.THE HOUSING APPLICATION SHOULD BE ARRIVED BEFORE DECEMBER 1 TO AVOID THE REJECTON.

4.YOUR ORDER HAS BEEN SHIPPED TODAY AND WILL BE DELIVERED WITHIN 3 DAYS.

5.THE DISCOUNT WILL BE GIVEN TO THE LOYALTY MEMBERSHIP CARD HOLDERS..