Question

The following sentences lack “you attitude “in business correspondence rewrite them to achieve the “YOU ATTITUDE “.

note ; in some cases you need to add information to revise the sentence effectively.

*please answer all of them, thanks in advance.

6-- The seminar given by our team will make you better and more professional managers than you are.*

7- You did not send us your check so we will not provide you with the furniture. *

8- We are pleased to inform you that our company installed a new ATM near your office. *

9- The credit card you supplied is expired and this is completely unacceptable behavior from your part. *

10- I will be out of the country from November 25 till December 5 and will not take any meetings or calls with anybody during that period. *

Answer 1

Solution :

“You Attitude” is a business writing process which includes writing in a way which helps in making readers to believe that they are the most important person for the business. It focuses on what readers want to know and relates to a positive attitude.

6. You will be a better and more professional manager with the help of the seminar given.

7. Please provide with your check as soon as possible in order to receive the furniture you ordered.

8. You will be pleased to know that a new ATM has been installed near your office.

9. The credit card being supplied by you cannot be used until it is renewed.

10. Please be informed that the meetings and calls will not be taken due to unavailability from November 25 to December 5.