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Asked at 2009.12.18 02:22:43
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When I Saw You Buying All The Maple
Bars At That Bakery I had Mixed Feelings
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When I saw You buying maple bars from
The bakery down the street I knew it
Was You - forever mine, forever mine.
Although You also grabbed an éclair I
Did not care, as sometimes they are also
Quite okay in their own particular….

Way. Because I like the particular….
I also like You. Where did You come from?
Did You simply stumble in there also,
Like me? I wonder a lot about it.
I wonder too if You like the way I
Stumble too, a particular of mine.

I also saw Your hair is soft like mine,
Cut nice in a way so particular.
I couldn’t stop staring even if I
Should have. And I remember sweating from
All the heat of electric ovens – it
Made my blue t-shirt soggy, Yours also ?

I wonder, do You like cookies also ?
If so, it would be nice if You liked mine,
The ones I buy at the bakery. It
Would make me smile in a particular
Way if You gobbled all my cookies from
The bakery, where I saw You, where I….

Had stumbled in right after You, where I
Had hoped to buy some maple bars also,
But sadly You even bought the ones from
Yesterday, the stale ones they said were mine.
Never mind, it’s just a particular,
Mainly because You smiled at me so it….

Doesn’t matter. As for my cookies it
Would make me smile and feel happy if I
Could toss You some, in a particular
Way, a nice way in which we could also
Satisfy You and this hunger of mine,
A hunger I had for maple bars from….

When You were also in the bakery,
So particular. With hunger like mine.
I smile. And from it You get my cookie.
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Answered at 2009.12.18 02:22:43
I loved waking up to you this morning!!
I saw this:

As friends we sit
At a table for four
I ask,
How'd you two meet?

The knowing smile will light up your face
A hush would come over the place....
As you swing through your Sestina

Each time, we sat after that
At just the right moment
The four
Toast to friendship
I lean back, and
I'll ask it again.

Thank you for this wonderful thought and perfect vision of one day
Being in your company, sharing a memory of the wish I have for you.
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