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What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!

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Asked at 2009.12.18 01:27:37
What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!?
I know I’m going to die. It is something I have known for a long time. But it is not something I will regret. I know it will be a good thing. It will put an end to the perilous journey I once thought was my life.
answer Robert  Answered at 2009.12.18 01:27:37
Those short sentences give the impression of desperation, and it's obvious the story line is one of desperation. Sounds like you are desperate to find justification for suicide. If it was reality, I would want to help or find help for you. If not reality, and it's about suicide then I would pass - there are enough real life problems in the world without dramatizing them. Sorry. Just my opinion.:)
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