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Asked at 2011.04.27 19:55:50
This is for a website. My grandpa is having investors put money up for an oil well project. This is part of the 'sales pitch' so to speak...just an intro to our project, but we have a long way to go with making it sound great. Here it is so far, please feel free to straighten up, mix and match, add any info at all:

This well is located in one of the most prolific producing areas of the world. Wells have been producing heavily in this area since the 1920's. As more and more companies and investors have continued to drill in these oil field, this location has become the heart of one of those most prolific oil and gas producing areas of the USA. Neighboring oil fields belong to major oil companies such as Chevron and Texaco.

There is nothing better than a good location. It might be said that a great oil well is like a great piece of real estate. The three best attributes of real estate, as with an oil well, are Location, Location, Location.

The location for this marked well has been controlled by our company since 1992 when the price of oil was only $8.00 per barrel. It would be impossible to obtain a good oil lease in this area today. [Basically what we need to say is because we've continuously had it leased since back then, we're locked in, and if we did not have control over it since back then, getting access to drill on this property would almost not even be possible because it is so desirable).
answer Jean L  Answered at 2011.04.27 19:55:50
There are very strict laws regarding how and where you can solicit investors. Better check them out first.
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