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Help editing and revising? Is there any way to clean this up or make the sentences sound better/Catchy?
Asked By Wikobey,Last Answer By Jean L At 2011.04,1 Answers

This is for a website. My grandpa is having investors put money up for an oil well project. This is part of the 'sales pitch' so to speak...just an intro to our project, but we have a long way to go with making it sound great. Here it is so far, please feel free to straighten up, mix and match, add any info at all:
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This well is located in one of the most prolific producing areas of the world. Wells have been producing heavily in this area since the 1920's. As more and more companies and investors have continued to drill in these oil field, this location has become the heart of one of those most prolific oil and gas producing areas of the USA. Neighboring oil fields belong to major oil companies such as Chevron and Texaco.

There is nothing better than a good location. It might be said that a great oil well is like a great piece of real estate. The three best attributes of real estate, as with an oil well, are Location, Location, Location.

The location for this marked well has been controlled by our company since 1992 when the price of oil was only $8.00 per barrel. It would be impossible to obtain a good oil lease in this area today. [Basically what we need to say is because we've continuously had it leased since back then, we're locked in, and if we did not have control over it since back then, getting access to drill on this property would almost not even be possible because it is so desirable).

Help me make sentences using these six words please?
Asked By Yuri ^_^,Last Answer By Jean-Pierre ♫ At 2011.03,1 Answers

le banc
la couronne de fleurs
le rang
feliciter (e has slash on it)
livrer
remercier

Ji Wen: assemble editing and insert editing, and the difference between the use of their respective
Asked By William Smith,Last Answer By Constantine Dodge At 2011.05,1 Answers

Uh, just short answer questions, without long-winded

How to make no sound and microphone headset sound loud
Asked By Evan smith,Last Answer By Abe Douglas At 2011.06,1 Answers

My microphone and speakers are plugged in computer use, but always will be a voice sound and a microphone, how to let out the sound of the stereo microphone, no sound of it, thank you

What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!
Asked By BabyCpattz,Last Answer By Robert At 2009.12,1 Answers

What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!?
I know I’m going to die. It is something I have known for a long time. But it is not something I will regret. I know it will be a good thing. It will put an end to the perilous journey I once thought was my life.

What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!
Asked By BabyCpattz,Last Answer By Robert At 2009.12,1 Answers

What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!?
I know I’m going to die. It is something I have known for a long time. But it is not something I will regret. I know it will be a good thing. It will put an end to the perilous journey I once thought was my life.

What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!
Asked By BabyCpattz,Last Answer By Robert At 2009.12,1 Answers

What do u think of the opening sentences to my story?i just want 2 know if it wants 2 make u read?plz answer!!?
I know I’m going to die. It is something I have known for a long time. But it is not something I will regret. I know it will be a good thing. It will put an end to the perilous journey I once thought was my life.

Help With GCSE Revising?
Asked By Nathan P,Last Answer By ★º°¨ஐ Sparkly Star ஐ At 2009.12,1 Answers

Right, I am 4/5 Months off taking my GCSE's and Im in need of help. I have suffered depression for the last few months as I am worried. My parents are hoping I can get Bs or Cs but as it stands Im getting Ds which I am unhappy with.

I try to revise but it seems nothing sinks in, its like I have a disability. Have I? I need help on good ways of revising, any suggested websites, CD programs?

Please Help

THANK YOU

I Melted rubber inside of my 3000$ KitchenAid Oven, and self clean dosent clean it, How do i clean it?
Asked By TheKiddo,Last Answer By Blessèd™ At 2010.01,1 Answers

I dropped cheese on the bottom tryed to pick it up with some rubber thing and it melted and the rubber that melted sticked to the bottom, ! i self cleand my oven, it didnt go away ????

Why does my computer to install the AC97 sound card no sound after driving it, the system sound icon in the lo
Asked By lily green,Last Answer By joy Green At 2011.06,1 Answers

How to make Earth clean?
Asked By kalki_v,Last Answer By Nitish B At 2010.02,1 Answers

Is there any way to stop using plastic bags? Will the government BAN USAGE OF PLASTIC BAGS?
Why not government ban SMOKING which pollutes the atmosphere?
Why not government put fine for SPITTING in public places?

How do crystals make that sound?
Asked By Kasey pink is LOVE,Last Answer By claptic At 2010.09,1 Answers

Lately I've been interested in learning more about crystals. I went to a store and bought a little white quartz. I used to collect rocks when I was a little kid...lots of crystals too..(that reminds me...lol...next time I visit my parents I'm gonna try & find them :))...and I never noticed the peaceful sound they make. My question is why do they do that? Does everything solid emit some sort of noise/vibration? Does the arrangement of its atoms determine the type of sound? Basically I am just confused how something like a rock can make sound.

Thanks :) No thumbs down...I welcome and appreciate all answers.

Can't seem to make myself clean my room no matter what. Help?
Asked By Moo M,Last Answer By Rudy Luggent At 2011.04,1 Answers

Why do I simply REFUSE to clean my room?
I don't even know why exactly, other than I just don't want to. This has been going on for years. My mom use to go into my room while I was away and then clean it up and get rid of anything on the floor. YOUD THINK that would make me go Ok Ill clean my own room. NOPE.
Whenever she mentions it, goes in it, or touches my door I get so flippin mad at her and idk why. I never use my room other than dumping my stuff in it, cept for sleeping. I should be more appreciative and stuff, but I just simply can't bring myself to do it. I have been yelled and punished because of this but I still do not want to clean my room, I tell myself to clean my room but I still don't do it.
I'd like to have a pretty room but when I try to start I get bored and go do something else. I do this with my backpack my little workspace on the counter in the kitchen, hell even the bathroom but the room is a million times worse, to the point where it's literally a health hazard. I haven't clean it in 2 years (I do my laundry though when I need clean clothes) but still .____.
IDK what to do. I rebel when my mom,sis or bro get involved and just simply blow it off some more.

How can i make my bedroom sound proof?
Asked By sparks3016,Last Answer By country boy At 2010.01,1 Answers

how can i make it sound proof using just cheaper materials? we are sharing a wall with a neighbor, we are always bothered by loud sound from their stereo. pls. help me to find a solution or just to minimize the loud sound. thank you.

When a star dies, does it make a sound?
Asked By Ask a Mexican ¡Hola Guerita!,Last Answer By The Garden of Eartha™ly Deli At 2010.09,1 Answers

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